Đề thi IELTS Writing task 1 ngày 16/3/2023 đã trở thành "cơn ác mộng" với nhiều thí sinh vì một dạng biểu đồ khá lạ. Hãy cùng nghía qua chiếc đề IELTS làm cộng đồng học IELTS dậy sóng mấy ngày qua và bài mẫu của Mr Nate Trương từ The SOL Education nhé. Bài này đã được gửi đến cựu giám khảo IELTS Alistair Brown chấm và nhận được band 8.5+ đó các bạn.
The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram compares temperature zones of tropical and temperate mountains in terms of differences in their distribution and altitudinal range.
It is clear that tropical mountains have a wider range of altitude-based temperature zones compared to temperate mountains, reaching higher altitudes before encountering permanent snow. Overall, the cultivation of crops and tree limits also differ significantly between the two mountain types.
In tropical mountains, the warm zone extends from sea level to roughly 550 meters, providing optimal conditions for various tropical crops. As the elevation increases, the temperate zone, spanning to about 1,750 meters, is predominantly utilized for coffee and cocoa plantations. In contrast, temperate mountains feature a cool zone ranging from 0 to 1,500 meters that accommodates grain cultivation, potatoes, flax, and marks the limit for broad-leaf trees.
Continuing upward, the cool zone in tropical mountains, limiting at 3,000 meters, supports grain cultivation and sets the boundary for broad-leaf trees. Above this zone, pine and fir forests thrive between 3,000 and 3,800 meters, followed by alpine meadows from 3,800 to 4,300 meters, and permanent snow above 4,300 meters. In temperate mountains, however, spruce forests dominate between 1,500 and 1,750 meters, while alpine meadows emerge from 1,750 to 2,750 meters, and permanent snow begins at 2,750 meters.
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Bài viết trên được gửi đến cựu giám khảo IELTS Alistair Brown và nhận được kết quả như sau:
IELTS Marking Criteria | Comments | Band score |
Task Fulfilment
| All the requirements of the task are fully and appropriatelysatisfied. No relevant information could be appropriately added to theresponse to improve the task achievement. | 9.0 |
Cohesion and Coherence
| The message can be followed effortlessly. Cohesion is used in such a way that it attracts no attention. Paragraphing is skilfully managed. | 9.0 |
Lexical resource
| A wide resource is fluently and flexibly used to convey precise meanings. There is skilful use of uncommon and/or idiomatic items when appropriate, despite occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation. Errors in spelling and/or word formation are rare and do not reduce the communicative effect. | 8.0 |
Grammatical Range and accuracy
| A wide range of structures is used with full flexibility and control. Punctuation is appropriate throughout. Appropriate and accurate grammar is used throughout. Minor errors are extremely rare and have no impact on communication. | 9.0 |
Như các bạn có thể thấy, bài viết được chấm ở band điểm 9.0, trong đó 3/4 tiêu chí đạt band điểm tối đa.
Các bạn có thể tham khảo bài viết chữa đề thi thật IELTS Writing ngày 16/3/2023 từ The SOL Education để không còn sợ hãi nếu gặp phải 1 đề IELTS Writing khó nhằn như thế này nữa nhé!
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