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Chữa đề IELTS Writing task 1 Cement-making process
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Chữa đề IELTS Writing task 1 Cement-making process

Chữa đề IELTS Writing task 1 The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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    Đề bài

    The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

    Phân tích đề bài và lập dàn ý

    1. Phân tích đề bài 

    • Loại biểu đồ: Diagrams
    • Dữ liệu: Quy trình làm xi măng và bê tông
    • Yếu tố cần lưu ý: Mặc dù có hai diagram, diagram bên phải tương đối đơn giản.

    2. Dàn ý tham khảo 

    • Introduction: Paraphrase đề bài
    • Overview: 
      • Làm xi măng cần năm bước và nhiều công cụ khác nhau.
      • Làm bê tổng chỉ cần một bước và một mày xoay bê tông.
    • Body Paragraph 1: Cement 
    • Body Paragraph 2: Concrete

    Sample answer Band 7.5 

    The first diagram illustrates the production of cement and the necessary instruments needed in the process, while the second one demonstrates how concrete used in construction can be made by using cement. 

    Overall, the manufacture of cement is a linear process consisting of five main stages and various tools. Producing concrete, on the other hand, only requires mixing different ingredients including cement in a concrete mixer. 

    Looking at the production of cement, the first stage starts when limestone and clay are crushed together into powder after being poured into a roll crusher. The resulting powder then goes through a mixer, before being transferred through a tube into a constantly rotating cylindrical heater. Subsequently, the heated mixture is transported on a conveyor belt into a grinder, where it is ground once more into cement. Finally, the cement is packaged into bags, ready to be transported to building sites where concrete is needed. 

    Cement is the only artificial ingredient in the production of concrete, accounting for 15% of the mixture needed to make it. The other components in said mixture include water (10%), sand (25%) and gravel (50%). All of these materials are poured into a concrete mixer which rotates to combine them until concrete is obtained. 

    Từ vựng IELTS hữu ích 

    • Production = Manufacture (n) Việc sản xuất.
    • Linear process (n) Quy trình tuyến tính
    • Powder (n) Bột
    • Cylindrical (adj) Hình trụ
    • Rotates (v) Xoay vòng 
    • Conveyor belt (n) Dây chuyền/ băng tải
    • Package (n) Gói hàng/ (v) Đóng gói 
    • Artificial (adj) Nhân tạo
    • Components (n) Thành phần
    • Mixture (n) Hỗn hợp 
    • Obtain (v) Lấy được 
       
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