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Chữa đề thi thật IELTS Writing task 2 - Environmental problems
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Chữa đề thi thật IELTS Writing task 2 - Environmental problems

Chữa đề thi thật IELTS Writing task 2 ngày 3/8/2025: Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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    Đề bài

    Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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    Với đề bài này, các bạn có thể tham khảo dàn ý sau nhé:

    • Introduction: 
      • Paraphrase lại đề bài. 
      • Thesis statement: Nhấn mạnh bài sẽ bàn bạc cả hai quan điểm, đồng thời làm rõ ý kiến của mình nghiêng về bên nào. 
    • Body Paragraph 1: Individuals actions don’t matter much 
      • Supporting point 1: The issues are too big for normal people
      • Explain: Government and corporations can not prevent it, how can a normal person do it? 
      • Supporting point 2: Individuals are not the biggest offenders.
      • Explain: Adopting a new lifestyle will not matter when corporations dump substantially more pollutants. 
    • Body Paragraph 2: There are things that normal people can do
      • Explain 1: Individuals might be powerless, but collaboration can make a difference
      • Explain 2: Protests/ mass movements have been very effective
      • Example: Farmers and workers organize protest and strike in central regions of Vietnam when the environment is polluted -> corporations had to change their waste treatment policy.
    •  Conclusion: 
      • Tóm tắt lại toàn bộ luận điểm được để cập trong bài.

    Sample answer band 7.5 

    Nowadays, there are several people who believe that what normal people can do is far too inconsequential compared to the enormity of the environmental crisis, while the opponents of this sentiment refuse the pessimism of the statement, arguing instead that we can make considerable differences as individuals. While both arguments are valid in their own way, I am more inclined to believe in the latter. 

    On the one hand, there are several reasons why individual actions do not seem to matter much. Firstly, the magnitude of the crisis we are dealing with, according to many climate change experts, is frankly quite horrifying. This is evidenced by the fact that collaborative efforts between government and corporations from all over the world has not been able to prevent the majority of natural catastrophes. Therefore, it might seem laughable to even suggest that an ordinary citizen can have the power to do anything effective. Secondly, it is undeniable that the primary actors that contribute to the acceleration and exacerbation of climate change are companies, factories and other for-profit private institutions around the world, not the average person. Adopting a greener lifestyle on the individual scale hardly matters when corporations, companies and factories continuously pump billions tons of pollutants into the environment with little to no push back from the government. 

    On the other hand, succumbing to pessimism also obscures the people's potential to combat climate change. Although separated individuals can be powerless to effect any meaningful changes, collaborating with other people to fight for a common environmental cause has been proven throughout modern history to be very effective. There have been many protests organized from the ground up from normal people that successfully push for positive changes for the environment. For example, in several Central regions in Vietnam, many factories were known to dump vast quantities of toxic waste into local bodies of water, leading to dire consequences on not only the environment but also people’s health. However, as the farmers and the workers began to organize mass protests and strikes in various localities, the corporations responsible for the factories had to cave in to their demand and made radical changes in their waste treatment policy. In short, the power of individuals lies not within themselves, but in their cooperation with their fellow human beings. 

    To conclude, while lone actions can not tackle environmental degradation in any meaningful way, serious changes are possible through collective activism. Therefore, it would be unwise to dismiss individual agencies entirely. 

    Từ vựng hữu ích 

    •     Inconsequential (adj) Quá vụn vặt, nhỏ bé, tầm thường 
    •     Enormity (n) Sự khổng lồ
    •     Exacerbation (n) Việc làm tồi tệ hơn
    •     Succumbing to pessimism (common phrase) Cam chịu đắm chìm vào sự tiêu cực 
    •     Dire consequences (collocation) Hậu quả khôn lường
    •     Collective activism (collocation) Hoạt động tập thể nhằm thay đổi điều gì đó.
    •     Radical changes (collocation) Sự thay đổi cấp tiền 
       
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