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Writing task 1 - Number of people employed in five types of work
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Writing task 1 - Number of people employed in five types of work

Chữa đề IELTS Writing task 1 đề bài: The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008. Đây cũng là đề thi IELTS Writing task 1 ngày 3/8/2024 paper-based vừa qua. 
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    Đề thi Task 1 ngày 3/8/2023

    The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008.

    Chữa đề tham khảo từ SOL

    Bài này là bar chart nhưng có yếu tố thời gian -> chúng ta sẽ xử lý bài với tư duy line graph

    • Overview: 

    Xu hướng (3 tăng >< 2 giảm)

    Đối tượng có con số cao nhất: Sales

    • BP1: Năm đầu tiên:

    sales: cao nhất >< cao gấp 8 lần farming

    Accounting, computing và nursing gần bằng nhau (xấp xỉ 60000)

    • BP2: Xu hướng 

    Accounting giảm -> 2. Farming cũng bắt chước, giảm

    Đối lập: sales tăng -> computing và nursing cũng tương tự, tăng

    Bài mẫu:

    The bar chart shows the number of people working in five different occupations - Sales, Accounting, Computing, Nursing, and Farming - in 2001 and 2008.

    Overall, the data indicates that the areas of sales, computing, and nursing saw an increase in the number of employees, while accounting and farming experienced a decline during the surveyed years. The majority of people worked in the field of sales.

    In 2001, sales had the largest number of workers, at just under 160,000 employees, which was almost 8 times higher than the figure for farming. Additionally, the numbers for accounting, computing, and nursing were relatively equal, with approximately 60,000 employees working in those fields.

    By 2008, there had been a gradual decrease of around 1,000 workers in the number of employees in accounting. Farming followed a similar pattern, declining to just below 20,000 people in the same period. In contrast, the figure for sales witnessed a rise of about 2,000 employees. Similarly, nursing and computing also experienced an increase to 60,000 and just under 80,000 people, respectively, in 2008.

    (175 words)

    Vocabulary:

     

    • occupations: nghề nghiệp

    • indicates: chỉ ra

    • employees: nhân viên

    • experienced: trải qua

    • decline: giảm

    • surveyed years: các năm khảo sát

    • majority: đa số

    • relatively equal: tương đối bằng nhau

    • gradual decrease: giảm dần

    • pattern: xu hướng

    • witnessed: chứng kiến

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